When I Touched Her Hand

Many a thoughts thought I

Even in my thoughts I only lie.

I tried and tried, then trusted I my reflex action

For I wanted to end all my damn desperation.

Much joy it brought when I touched her hand!

Felt I my emotionally hardened feelings softened

Now, supposed I, I can my poorly done deeds amend

And lo! She did my weakness comprehend

She trusts me, she does, and I know

She has faith in me, and is proving she is mine

What more does she need to show?

Hand in hand we walk; we are, of course, on cloud nine.

7 thoughts on “When I Touched Her Hand”

What electricty 🙂

Good one, Ramu – and all the very best.

RAMU DAS says:

June 23, 2013 at 5:12 pm

Hahaha! Thanks! 🙂

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🙂 seems someone is floating on cloud nine!

RAMU DAS says:

June 23, 2013 at 5:13 pm

True, the fictional character, here, is floating on cloud nine. 😉

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Wow Love Poem at its best..Carry On hand in hand.. 🙂

RAMU DAS says:

June 23, 2013 at 5:15 pm

Thanks. Hand in hand, the characters in my mind are still walking.

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1. Harsha says:
  
  June 23, 2013 at 5:17 pm
  
  :-)…Carry on with the walk,then we can hope for some more nice lines from you..
  
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