Many a thoughts thought I
Even in my thoughts I only lie.
I tried and tried, then trusted I my reflex action
For I wanted to end all my damn desperation.
Much joy it brought when I touched her hand!
Felt I my emotionally hardened feelings softened
Now, supposed I, I can my poorly done deeds amend
And lo! She did my weakness comprehend
She trusts me, she does, and I know
She has faith in me, and is proving she is mine
What more does she need to show?
Hand in hand we walk; we are, of course, on cloud nine.
Copyright © 2013 RAMU DAS
7 thoughts on “When I Touched Her Hand”
What electricty 🙂
Good one, Ramu – and all the very best.
Hahaha! Thanks! 🙂
🙂 seems someone is floating on cloud nine!
True, the fictional character, here, is floating on cloud nine. 😉
Wow Love Poem at its best..Carry On hand in hand.. 🙂
Thanks. Hand in hand, the characters in my mind are still walking.
:-)…Carry on with the walk,then we can hope for some more nice lines from you..